In reply to Christian
> To everyone else who replied to my post, thanks. Despite the feedback not being what I was hoping for it’s helpful nonetheless. This is my third questionnaire posted on UKC, together the data received from them will be collated together and hopefully give myself clearer answers to the perception of risk in rock climbers opposed to the non-climbing public.
It's not going to, though. For the reasons that splat2million gives. Your questions are leading and your control group likely to be affected by confounding variables.
You are allowed to have a preference for a positive outcome; you wouldn't be doing the study if you didn't think there was something there to find. However, your questionnaire should be phrased entirely neutrally or it will invalidate your findings.
If the Scottish independence referendum question was- 'independence would be great, do you agree?', people would understandably have some concerns over the objectiveness of the result.... Your study appears to have too many questions that are setting out to get a particular result
I don't think you really have a testable hypothesis there- it's too broad. It needs to be considerably more focused eg 'male climbers aged 18-25 will underplay the risk associated with Scottish winter climbing compared to controls of a similar age'- even that isnt entirely satisfactory but its a whole lot more testable than what you've got at present.
The petulance in the response to andy isn't useful either- you need to take this feedback as gold, far better to face some uncomfortable comments here than in your viva exam from the external examiner.... And the spelling and grammar does matter, this is an extension of your undergrad degree work, not banter in 'the pub'
Really this should have been picked up by your supervisor before you went public with it, this seems to be a common theme with most of the surveys on here,
Best wishes and I hope you et something useable, I didn't complete it though as too many of the questions would have generated meaningless responses from me
Cheers
Gregor