In reply to JoH - Editor: i feel a bit bad about adding to the general air of lay-editorialising but i found that a bit hard to read in a 'sentences a bit too long - words unnecessarily 'clever' - phrases a bit too self-consciously flowery' kinda way
also the blocks of texts are a bit too huge
i ended up not reading it in fact but i'm busier than i am bored today . . .
sorry! i'll probabably have another go later