In reply to UKC Articles:
It reads a little like the Crabbies Alcoholic Ginger Beer Advert (which I suppose is the point) - a cliche and overdone. It does feel as though the author has hit on a vague idea and created something that is thin on substances, lacking in construct and without a lot of imagination.
However, it's a bit of fun, so if people enjoy it then so be it. Not my tastes but hey ho.