In reply to Pinged:
From tha wikkeepee:
"The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru).This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them, a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.
Traditional haiku consist of 17 "on" (also known as morae [which we may as well equate to syllables), in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 on respectively. Any one of the three phrases may end with the kireji."
so you can see that this:
fast ride down the moor
last jump landed, kinda, f*ck
ing thumb f*cking f*cked
follows the 5,7,5 rule, the justaposition being riding and injury; first f*ck being the kirenji...
Bradford Royal Infirmary on a Sunday whilst a rich source of images is harder to work into a haiku.