In reply to Carolyn:
Edited from a Facebook conversation (all my side):
Pt. 1)
This is awful writing.
Finlay is not from "the south-west" unless they mean south-west Warrington.
There are no "records" being set (semantics, I know - obviously one could class an FA or FFA as a "record" but I've never seen the word "record" being used in any sense in climbing, apart from speed records on The Nose(s) )
How can an open-ended scale have a top end? That's a contradiction in terms (I know that top end is still open, but to a "layman" it is poor and confusing writing)
I think such shoddy journalism does a disservice to these climbers. I also think that even if tightened up, an article like this is still counterproductive, patronising claptrap; it stinks of "didn't these girls do well, some of them are nearly as good as men".
Pt. 2)
Hence my final sentence which essentially imagines the article with correct facts etc. It still doesn't show these ladies "kicking ass", it shows them being "nearly as good as men". Or am I perhaps reading that into it?
I just think that "women doing some top-end hard climbs" could be reported in a more "empowering" way.
Pt. 3)
OK I may have simply over-reacted to this line.
"rapidly closing the gap with their male contemporaries"
I've re-read the piece more objectively and though it still leaves a bad taste, it's not irking me as much as it initially had.