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A mysterious portal opens and people are taken in by deformed figures and not return.
a researcher discovers that these people are dead and taken there could be no human survivors, because the intention is that the man is replaced by a perfect being would exist in place of the human being.
a group that escaped including this researcher and his son take refuge being hunted by deformed and survive and find a way to destroy the various portals.
Update : I intend to write more than one book.

In reply to Isa477:

I'd get someone to proof read and correct the grammar first.

In reply to ThunderCat:
You like this idea?

In reply to Isa477:

Any sexy subplots?

In reply to ThunderCat: no ,but you like?

In reply to Isa477:

Will you be writing it in English or in your mother tongue?

In reply to ThunderCat:
I don't start.

In reply to Isa477:

It's got potential!

Sexy subplots always help though

In reply to Isa477:


With threats like that what's the point of Trident?

But seriously, check this link. Might help you.

http://tinyurl.com/p9lptfe

In reply to felt :why you get this?

In reply to felt:




Ok, I'm confused. Is this a robot or something?

In reply to ThunderCat: is not a robot.

In reply to ThunderCat:

I think even a robot would come up with something more original.

In reply to Felt:you like?

In reply to Isa477:

Sorry...the links above show that the same question has been posted in lots of other forums and I thought it might have been some clever bot with an ulterior motive.

My mistake.

In reply to ThunderCat:
This is bad?

In reply to ThunderCat:
>> My mistake.

You could still be right.

In reply to Isa477:

No, I misunderstood.

The story reminds me a little of Stargate

In reply to felt:

This is good?

In reply to Isa477:

It's possibly the best plot I've ever come across. You'll be beating of the Hollywood bigboys with a very large literary stick. Are you looking for crowd funding?

In reply to gribble:
You like this plot?

In reply to Isa477:

Have you thought about including Zumbis in it?

In reply to Isa477:
No .

In reply to Isa477:

What about talking dogs?

In reply to ThunderCat:
No.

In reply to Isa477:

Awe. Shame.

In reply to Isa477:

Joking aside Isabella, what language do you intend to write this story in? English obviously isn't your first / native language, so what you might find is that no matter how good the story is, it will not come across very well if written in English (but may come across extremely well in your native tongue)

That's not a criticism, it's just some constructive advice. Your English is many many times better than my non-English....

In reply to Isa477:


Is Hamster!!!!

In reply to ThunderCat:

I will whrite in my native language.

In reply to Isa477:

As an editor my advice would be to focus on characters first, plot second. If your characters are well-formed then they will do most of the work for you.

Good luck.

In reply to Only a hill:

Did you like the plot.

In reply to Isa477:

Go for it Isabella. What's the worst that can happen?

In reply to Isa477:

Difficult to tell from such a short synopsis, but it could turn out well. It's all in the execution.

In reply to Isa477:

Will there be any spiders in the story? I really like spiders in a novel.

In reply to Isa477:


Four words, and I have already realised I'm not the target market for this.

Nevertheless, having briefly read on it sounds a little like a reworking of HG Wells' The Time Machine, approached from a different starting point. Not exact, but there are similarities


Good luck with it. Best not to share too many ideas, as someone else may write it first.

T.

In reply to Isa477:

The plot is f*cking Awesome

In reply to ThunderCat:


I like robot dogs.

In reply to estivoautumnal:

Will there be any spiders in the story? I really like spiders in a novel.

and aln:

I like robot dogs.


Have both: -

youtube.com/watch?v=YoB8t0B4jx4&

In reply to Isa477:

I fear I've lost the plot.

In reply to Isa477:

Have you thought about writing a book about a kid who finds out he's a wizard?

In reply to FactorXXX:






Nothing robotic about the spiderdog, obviously genetically modified.

Will there be a twist that will reveals sharks with frickin laser beams?

In reply to Isa477:

Maybe there has to be some romance like the researcher falls in love with a beautiful woman, but doesn't know she really is an android from a parallel universe who's been sent to assassinate him and make it look natural causes so the researches findings never come to light.

In reply to Isa477:

I can't help but feel Alan Turing is hiding behind a curtain somewhere...

http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/technology/jamiebartlett/100013858/no-eugene-d...

In reply to The Mystery Toad:

I established early on that there shall be no sexy sub-plots. It's a brave move by the OP. Sex sells. Everyone knows that.

In reply to Dandan:



It does have that feel to it, doesn't it...

In reply to Isa477:

I really like the plot , but feel it could be enhanced with maybe a character with really long wiggly arms who likes to touch people in sensitive places ?!

And what if he was to have an accident prone acquaintance ?

And a character who looks like Kelly Brook ? Plus another who looks like Dame Judy Dench , that could work do you think ?

In reply to Isa477:

This exact same topic was posted on the Kindle Users Forum yesterday as well.
http://www.kuforum.co.uk/kindleusersforum/thread-17285-post-157530.html

Move along, folks. It's spam of some description.

In reply to Only a hill:

Is it . . really ?

Well I never did . . .

In reply to ThunderCat:


Ah I see, no doubt with that view it's on it's way to getting a cult following.