In reply to Mick - Rockfax USA: Well the first paragraph is a total lie for a start.
"rolling bombs"; what the hell are they? Crap mixed metaphor.
You spelled grey wrong (its not gray)
a semicolon in "hollow-eyed; their faces plastered with a permanent.
"On any given day between October and May in the cozy Kava café on Main Street you will sip your Kashmir Soy Chai amongst a cosmopolitan crowd of"
feels like it needs some punctuation somewhere, not sure where though; comma after May and Main Street?
Also I think cosy isnt spelled with a z, unless thats another Americanism.
Fuelling - double "l"?
"have all featured flashy-color feature articles about"
i think is better as "
have all featured flashy colour-feature articles about"
catalog - catalogue
Hennce pad people - should be hence
end para 5 and middle para 7- its not it's
"a native of Santa Cruz and one of the words best boulderers and sport climbers winters here sometimes and for a while lived in the small mining village of Rovana at the base of the imposing Mount Tom that shadows most of the bouldering areas" - needs punctuating
"every-day climbing Joe's and Josephine's" take out apostrophes - its a plural s not a posession s
Banff has a double f
Last para; can you start a sentence with And? is this acceptable now?
Cross country and back country skiing ARE 15 minutes (not is 15 mins)
"One last word;" not ","
I stand corrected on these and there may be some others I have missed.
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