In reply to IanDHat:
I think this is ok, but the main concerns I can think of are:
1. That sling on the left looks a bit dodgy; is it tape tied in a loop? If so, whilst some older climbers still use this, most people these days would buy pre-sewn slings, as they're more reliable. This also raises the question of how old your tape/slings are. The extra knots in the slings above the connections are not necessary and actually weaken the slings; the same goes for the girth hitch you've used here to attach the slings to the frame - which is ok but there are better ways. Rather than using a girth hitch, I would generally just fold the sling around the tree and connect the ends together with a crab, as this is the strongest configuration short of doubling (or tripling, etc) the sling. Finally, make sure your trees or other anchors are really reliable, or the whole system could catastrophically fail.
2. Use locking carabiners to connect your slings to your rope (as someone else mentioned). And do these up. The one on the right looks as though it is not done up. Also make sure, in real life, that the carabiners are not being tensioned over an edge.
3. The fig-8 on one end is good, but your stopper knot looks a little dodgy. Make sure there's a good tail, in case of slippage.
4. Contrary to someone else above, I think the clove hitch on the other end is fine, but orient the carabiner the other way, so that the hitch is on the broader part of the crab; preferably use an HMS.
5. There's no need for the double-figure-8 configuration at the master point. Personally, I would bring the two arms together (without creating an obtuse angle) with an overhand to make a nice double arm that I can put a rope protector around, and then put a single figure of 8 on the end for my carabiners. This is an improvement only in as much as it is slightly simpler and therefore more likely that you will equalise the system correctly..
6. The carabiners are best oriented the other way up, so that gravity is working with the spiral-lock to keep the carabiners locked.
7. Make sure that the carabiner loops are hanging in free space, over the edge, so that the rope you will be climbing on can move without being impeded or abraided. Also, double-check that it is equalised in the true direction of pull. Protect yourself from falling off the cliff whilst you sort this out, e.g. by clipping yourself into your rig.
8. Rope-protectors really are a must. Even on quite a smooth rock like limestone, it's shocking how much a rope can be abraided. It's not just a matter of rope preservation - it's actually a risk for the system failing.
I hope that's actually helpful, and not just overly picky. If you haven't already looked at a book (most in the UK would recommend this one: https://www.amazon.co.uk/Rock-Climbing-Essential-Skills-Techniques/dp/09541...), then I would, as there are so many variables outside that it's good to get a strong grasp of the basic principles and the rationale behind these, rather than just having one setup in mind.
Best,
CW