This looks like it might be a politically commendable but methodologically questionable exercise. It’s foreseeable that the resulting statistics will only reflect the demography of self-selecting respondents – those motivated to respond to such a survey. Just what this sample may be representative of could be hard to unravel. I’m not convinced it will reflect the population of participants in (a very wide range of) outdoor activities.
Starting out with a conclusion in mind isn’t generally the best way to frame the intro to a survey questionnaire as it sets up a proposition bias from the outset. I‘m referring to...
“the benefits are not shared evenly, with people from an ethnic minority background, people with disabilities, and women, among those less likely to enjoy the benefits.”
If the proportions in the hills were to be the same as the proportions in society, how many of each minority should represent ‘fair representation’. Scotland, for example, had 2.6% Asian and 0.12% Black population in 2011. Broadly 1 in 50 and 1 in 1000 resp. Numbers like these would be ‘noise’ even in most quantitative sample surveys.
Does the survey interest me as a (probable) majority demographic to participate? Or am I demotivated by the meta-influence I think a response like mine will have? How many would-be respondents are thinking the same? How are tailored individual responses (essay answers) incorporated statistically? Context, and any inferences premised on randomisation of samples, are going to be the missing pieces for interpretation of your responses.
Another issue is the categorisations suggested. Being ‘a minority’ is a pretty broad qualification, and not all minorities are simple or unique for analysis purposes. Some are meaningful and some less so. There will always be minorities (a statistical truism) and departures from proportional representation in any population are not always significant or blameworthy.
So I think I see why your article is getting some 'down arrows'.